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Soarburn 3 by stileelits Soarburn 3 by stileelits
Just a little cuddling between colts...
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GhostLucario Featured By Owner Dec 19, 2015  Hobbyist Digital Artist
It took me a while to figure out where all those parts are coming from. Then I realized Soarin was leaning back
KDBA1964 Featured By Owner Mar 26, 2015
Very very lovely you actually captured me n'soarin well
Sarha-Galaxia Featured By Owner Jun 6, 2014  Student Artist
todos los que hacen pornografía de ponis es gay
SeriusPonyIsSerius1 Featured By Owner Jul 15, 2014  Student General Artist
¿Entonces por qué miras?
DovetheUnoriginal Featured By Owner May 14, 2014
I love the pose you were aiming for, because it's so loving and gentle. If it had turned out better, it would have been an instant fave!

Unfortunately, the anatomy is horrible.  Braeburn's leg is mangled incomprehensibly and he has no mid-section apparently. The attempt at giving him a more humanoid upper body didn't quite pan out either. His arm is strongly juxtaposed beside Soarin's and the muscular definition is awkward even for a human arm. With the position of Braeburn's head, instead of looking as if his neck is arched, it appears as if he doesn't have one. His tail looks like the end of a large paintbrush, not a pony tail.

Soarin is much better off, in fact he looks good overall (although the one wing that we see isn't defined that well and looks far too long) but there isn't enough room for his neck when leaning back like that, so it seems to be melding into Braeburn's body. We should be seeing more of his throat jutting out, if he's simply resting it there, even from this angle. I also have it in my head that as Soarin leans back, Braeburn should probably be crouched forward, not sitting upright, but that particular detail may be personal preference. The rest of my complaints are not.

I wanted to like this. I really did. I hope that you brush up on your human and animal anatomy, then study the way the ponies work in the cartoon a little more, and try drawing this again. It's a great idea... It just didn't work out this time. :(
stileelits Featured By Owner May 14, 2014
i don't really draw anymore, but thanks for the detailed feedback. to tell the truth, i totally forgot about soarin's wings until i had finished everything else, so i had to add it in at the last minute...
ytsejam58 Featured By Owner Apr 27, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I meant to say actually Can't reach down.... DeviantArt plz add edit like Facebook has
ytsejam58 Featured By Owner Apr 27, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I love holding my partner like that... Although I actually actually reach that far down =.= I don't think they are doing what people think they are doing.
thegraydevils Featured By Owner May 14, 2013
wait..........oh >.> so thats what their doing. hehehe naughty ponies. x3
QueenofCroatia Featured By Owner Nov 12, 2012
docbrony Featured By Owner Oct 22, 2012  Student Writer
do the doctor and ditzy nest plz
S0ULxASSASS1N Featured By Owner Oct 12, 2012  Professional General Artist
0.0 I am speechlessly awed by the style and the artwork itself.
You have to do one of Caramac!!!!
losinggoose7 Featured By Owner Sep 4, 2012
Thats cute.
sleepysheep7 Featured By Owner Sep 3, 2012
my my you are showing quite a bit of improvement in your pony art. keep it up.
stileelits Featured By Owner Sep 3, 2012
Thanks! I'm actually kind of embarrassed to look at some of my old pics now...probably feel the same way about my current pics in a few months.
ZaphirusOs Featured By Owner Sep 3, 2012
So. Cute. ~
KittyCreator Featured By Owner Sep 3, 2012  Student Digital Artist
I was confused at first. I was like :iconpinkiepiewutplz:

Then i realized what was going on

Then i was like :iconpinkiegaspplz: And then :iconclapplz: Good. Good for them.
DoctorDash Featured By Owner Sep 3, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Braeburn looks a little chubby for some reason... not sure why...
But after I realized what the hell was going on...

wonderpikachu12 Featured By Owner Sep 2, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Aww~ ^^
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